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Warm,
Warm, gentle, and sweet
A smile finds my lips.

Calm,
Calm, fading, and soft
The lids begin to drop.

Dream,
Dream, whisper, and fly
These thoughts all slip away...
©2006-2010 ~achildapart
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I'm trying to write some poetry that makes the reader feel like what the poem is about. Feedback would be very helpful.

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:icondrawerx:
a very cute rime, nice work sounds good to my ears

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